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I feel the chill of bitter air,
as I lie her motionless on cold-stone.
The life has left me unaware
as I lay here all alone.

You took my life and left me limp.
I could feel my blood run cold.
I float above the place I lay,
a haunted beautiful cold ghost.

I loved you in my earthly form.
You took that love away.
You took the blade and stabbed me deep
threw me in the weeds to fade away.

I may be there to haunt your nights.
Pull the air from your very lungs.
You left me lifeless and suffering so,
a white light never came to rescue me.

I wonder in the bitter cold,
oh yes the cold that breaks through bone.
I ache with every ounce of pain
you threw me in the weeds to fade away.

The cold stone is no bed in which for a beauty to lay…….

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~Cold and Bare~

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 17th April 2012 @ 03:55:33 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

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I feel the chill of bitter air,
as I lie her motionless on cold-stone.
The life has left me unaware
as I lay here all alone.

You took my life and left me limp.
I could feel my blood run cold.
I float above the place I lay,
a haunted beautiful cold ghost.

I loved you in my earthly form.
You took that love away.
You took the blade and stabbed me deep
threw me in the weeds to fade away.

I may be there to haunt your nights.
Pull the air from your very lungs.
You left me lifeless and suffering so,
a white light never came to rescue me.

I wonder in the bitter cold,
oh yes the cold that breaks through bone.
I ache with every ounce of pain
you threw me in the weeds to fade away.

The cold stone is no bed in which for a beauty to lay…….

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Copyright Â© shelby ... [ 2012-04-17 15:55:33]
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Re: ~Cold and Bare~ (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Wednesday, 18th April 2012 @ 07:10:06 AM AEST
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shelby that was beautiful WOW,thank you so much for sharing
the hot shot poet

Re: ~Cold and Bare~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 18th April 2012 @ 02:25:05 PM AEST
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Geeze, murder sucks...lol. :p This is dark and dreary full of dark imagery. I enjoyed it but wondering if you meant her or here in the first stanza because one of the "hers' seems to work either way.

Thanks,

Tim

Re: ~Cold and Bare~ (User Rating: 1 )
by flavellm on Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 03:10:47 PM AEST
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this is seriously good, haunting and evocative

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