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Think it over
Dont rush through it
Just enjoy it
Love yourself
Without improvement
Life is passing
Day after day
Seconds pass
You missed your chance
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Life

Contributed by LetYourFeelingsOut on Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 09:38:15 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Breathing slowly
Think it over
Dont rush through it
Just enjoy it
Love yourself
Without improvement
Life is passing
Day after day
Seconds pass
You missed your chance
What if its your very last?

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Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 10:02:06 AM AEST
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if this is your first poem keep doing just what your doing the words you write need to come from your heart for other poet's to be able to read between the lines,thanks for sharing keep up the good work
the hot shot poet

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Raggie on Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 11:49:31 AM AEST
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I love the sentiment that drives your poem. For a first attempt this is a good write. I am pleased that you found the courage to dip your toe in. Now all you need to do is plumb the depths of your heart. Very well written poet:)

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Kailas on Friday, 20th April 2012 @ 03:50:53 PM AEST
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very nice you should definitely keep writing. As long as it comes from the heart you shouldn't care what anyone else think. :P

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Friday, 22nd March 2013 @ 06:40:41 PM AEST
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Might be your first though written with matureity

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