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Array ( [sid] => 17222 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Remember [time] => 2003-05-08 04:05:00 [hometext] => They say into each life comes one and only one true love. If you have to wonder if you've found yours... then you haven't. When it comes... you know. [bodytext] => I Remember

I remember the first time you held me;
In your arms I felt I'd found my home.
I remember the last time I saw you;
When I learned the meaning of alone.

I remember the aroma of your soft skin;
More arousing to me than any perfume.
I remember perfume on my pillows;
Another stranger in a cheap hotel room.

I remember your very first "I love you";
Diamond words, a promise of forever.
I remember you walking to your car;
The only word I now recall was "never".

I remember being anxious to see you;
Going to bed at eight to rush the morning.
I remember you and miss you each day;
My life, my love, my soul's transforming.

Frank Van Hoose
May 7, 2003

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Ravan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Remember

Contributed by Ravan on Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I Remember

I remember the first time you held me;
In your arms I felt I'd found my home.
I remember the last time I saw you;
When I learned the meaning of alone.

I remember the aroma of your soft skin;
More arousing to me than any perfume.
I remember perfume on my pillows;
Another stranger in a cheap hotel room.

I remember your very first "I love you";
Diamond words, a promise of forever.
I remember you walking to your car;
The only word I now recall was "never".

I remember being anxious to see you;
Going to bed at eight to rush the morning.
I remember you and miss you each day;
My life, my love, my soul's transforming.

Frank Van Hoose
May 7, 2003

Copyright © Ravan ... [ 2003-05-08 04:05:00]
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Re: I Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 10:03:05 AM AEST
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your poem is so outstandingly beautiful, yet i find this one line,"Another stranger in a cheap hotel room." to take away from it's overall loveliness, i still love it though lol,
hugs nessa

Re: I Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Ravan on Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 10:33:22 AM AEST
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Thank you for your very nice words. I do appreciate them. The "cheap hotel room" line is a stark contrast between the two extremes of loving a woman and loving nothing. It's just and unfortunate and unattractive truth. Truths are often like that I've found. ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed it.
frank

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