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BITERNESS
Contributed by
wazarov
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Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Im the east and shes the west
and in my feast, shes all the best
as I lay among the dead
fresh like a maiden in her bed.
In a blink of an eye, she flies.
Beyond my grasp, she dies.
We talk prose as we get overdose
and I would be richest, if I was paid
for every word I wrote for her...
But it is easy to say what is hard to do.
I just wish that Ill die before I will again cry for you.
I wish to fly, to where I will never again miss you.
Envy no man with a thirsty heart for a drought soul.
There is no fact, only the way you act...
Copyright ©
wazarov
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2003-05-08 11:35:00]
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Re: BITERNESS
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by lilch4ever on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 02:02:43 PM AEST
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| That was very good. Nice write. |
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Re: BITERNESS
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by shelby on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 10:23:34 PM AEST
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another good poem!!
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Re: BITERNESS
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by Apartment213 on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 02:43:48 AM AEST
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| hey this was a great poem dean i can feel every word with passion |
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Re: BITERNESS
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 06:29:23 PM AEST
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wow, i think you should get paid for every word you write, period. I loved it, it was a beautifully done poem Dean... great rhythm, great everything...
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