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Array ( [sid] => 172392 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Wise and Wild Wind [time] => 2012-05-07 14:21:56 [hometext] => Trying to get use to using assonance , consonance and alliteration in my poems. See what you think. [bodytext] => ~***~
Past the trees and silent hills
I run to where my heart desires
knowing not and needing not
woes or worries , food nor fire.

I rush and touch the clouds so high
whipping , wild and running free
through the rain and o'er the moor ,
ocean , forest and moutain range.

I love the seas and see below
pirates smiling , dashing o'er
wild waves and who may know
to where their bold adventure goes.

They , like me , are wild and free
and none could hold us to a room.
A stay to long , for vagabonds ,
feels to often like a tomb.

Better we should take our leave
and flee toward horizon far
where wizards stalk the mountain top ;
where things of lore still haunt the shores.

Perhaps you scoff or cant believe
but I have seen the centuries
and I will see them evermore for
I'm the wise , the wild wind...

the wise and wild wind.
~***~

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The Wise and Wild Wind

Contributed by doug on Monday, 7th May 2012 @ 02:21:56 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

~***~
Past the trees and silent hills
I run to where my heart desires
knowing not and needing not
woes or worries , food nor fire.

I rush and touch the clouds so high
whipping , wild and running free
through the rain and o'er the moor ,
ocean , forest and moutain range.

I love the seas and see below
pirates smiling , dashing o'er
wild waves and who may know
to where their bold adventure goes.

They , like me , are wild and free
and none could hold us to a room.
A stay to long , for vagabonds ,
feels to often like a tomb.

Better we should take our leave
and flee toward horizon far
where wizards stalk the mountain top ;
where things of lore still haunt the shores.

Perhaps you scoff or cant believe
but I have seen the centuries
and I will see them evermore for
I'm the wise , the wild wind...

the wise and wild wind.
~***~

Copyright © doug ... [ 2012-05-07 14:21:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Wise and Wild Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by richard2 on Monday, 7th May 2012 @ 02:40:50 PM AEST
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Excellent use of image, impressive.
good job keep up the good work
Richard2

Re: The Wise and Wild Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by desciple on Tuesday, 8th May 2012 @ 02:47:14 PM AEST
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great write, very imaginative, really enjoyed reading

Re: The Wise and Wild Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Saturday, 12th May 2012 @ 07:33:56 AM AEST
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ahhhh ... a different write from you.

Well, you've definitely captured the feel of nature. I could smell the
crisp breezes and taste the sea air. You've done well.

~ Breezy
^_^

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