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Pigs Masquerading As Chivalrous Gentlemen
Contributed by
drogedarain
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Wednesday, 30th May 2012 @ 06:01:29 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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Slight of hand, twists of fate So many things in life to contemplate What is real, what is fake My mind reels with every second of every breath of my destined fate Ive had my fill of all the men in this world past, present and future it seems Got no more time to waste on anymore meaningless first dates These men seem to turn out the same whether I meet them on my own or set up on a blind date Pigs masquerading as chivalrous gentlemen Feeding me the fat instead of the meat Ill now wait to be discovered if in fact there is still A chance that a Mr. Right my ultimate soul mate truly does exist One can still hope right??? But I have got to do something about this philosophy of mine Trust and believe in no man that comes along Seems Im setting myself up for failure with this little ditty always rambling on in my mind My lifes not over yet I feel it has just begun I hope that the positive energy in another I crave can somehow smash through the negative I seem to exude even if it only happens in my mind
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Re: Pigs Masquerading As Chivalrous Gentlemen
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th May 2012 @ 06:45:48 PM AEST (User
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I think the feelings of frustration and your philosophy can really be applied to either gender, because I can completely understand (and relate).
And yes, one can still hope.
Nicely written poem for what seems to be a classic subject.
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: Pigs Masquerading As Chivalrous Gentlemen
(User Rating: 1 ) by northernlights on
Thursday, 31st May 2012 @ 01:46:33 PM AEST (User
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Very relatable write,poignant ,expressing the anguish and frustration of many of us no doubt. Writing from the heart and about the heart is often the most powerful because its open in its honesty enough to connect with others who know the reality. |
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