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[sid] => 172825
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => light versus darkness
[time] => 2012-06-05 04:37:52
[hometext] => this a poem i wrote for english class the teacher gave me an A on it i posted it here for feedback because i love writing and i wish to become writer after i graduate highschool and colleage so please give me feedback
[bodytext] => Light versus Dark The sun is destruction The moon is life The planets are their servants Like angels are to God Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars All spell death and destruction Mercury is ice, Venus is lust, Earth is sin and Mars is fire. The moon is life Jupiter, Neptune, Uranus, Saturn and Pluto Serve the side of the light Jupiter is air, Neptune is water, Uranus is light, Saturn is color Pluto is time All these elements of life Differing as they do ,all connect And complement each other In different ways For there to be life There has to be destruction For there to be peace There has to be violence. For there to be light There has to be darkness. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 64 [informant] => tica [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )
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