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Array ( [sid] => 172944 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Rain of Emotions [time] => 2012-06-10 15:52:54 [hometext] => Don't hold in your emotions. Release them and feel a phenominal sensation. [bodytext] => The beauty of rain is the energy that follows.
Drawing fresh cool air from the depths above,
Relinquishing our sorrows.

As the humidity passes and the randomness slides,
I can’t help to wonder,
Does the falling rain exemplify my life?

Moisture assembles above the surface,
Much like my anxiety collects,
Ready to burst with thoughts of worthless.

As we hold the emotions that we feel,
The pain continues,
Builds, and builds, as the clouds continue to wheel.

I let go, tears fall and I begin to feel cold.
The cloud bursts,
And the water droplets begin their flow.

Massive amounts of energy stream through the tears,
But a phenomenal sensation,
Conquers my fears.

The clouds always bring cold rain from above,
But the as the cycle goes,
A warmth of perspective emerges from the sun.
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The Rain of Emotions

Contributed by nluchett on Sunday, 10th June 2012 @ 03:52:54 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

The beauty of rain is the energy that follows.
Drawing fresh cool air from the depths above,
Relinquishing our sorrows.

As the humidity passes and the randomness slides,
I can’t help to wonder,
Does the falling rain exemplify my life?

Moisture assembles above the surface,
Much like my anxiety collects,
Ready to burst with thoughts of worthless.

As we hold the emotions that we feel,
The pain continues,
Builds, and builds, as the clouds continue to wheel.

I let go, tears fall and I begin to feel cold.
The cloud bursts,
And the water droplets begin their flow.

Massive amounts of energy stream through the tears,
But a phenomenal sensation,
Conquers my fears.

The clouds always bring cold rain from above,
But the as the cycle goes,
A warmth of perspective emerges from the sun.

Copyright Â© nluchett ... [ 2012-06-10 15:52:54]
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Re: The Rain of Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Sunday, 10th June 2012 @ 04:11:20 PM AEST
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Hello, Nice write, but I think you can do so much better. You seem to be on the verge of grabbing feeling from the reader and just as you do, you let go! Grab the reader with your words and make them feel and visualize from your words.

You can do it

wayne

Re: The Rain of Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by Ellewood on Sunday, 10th June 2012 @ 05:02:36 PM AEST
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you are right about that..holding everything inside only cause grief . letting go and crying or screaming or whatever you have to do is cleansing to the soul. Nice write...

Re: The Rain of Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on Monday, 11th June 2012 @ 11:12:16 AM AEST
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I rather connected with your words. It drew to the feelings in my world today. I liked the imagery, and the flow. Nice write. Thank you for sharing. P

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