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Array ( [sid] => 172946 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sadness is the pain [time] => 2012-06-10 16:48:53 [hometext] => Love is a strange feeling, i am new at poetry and i will love some respons, [bodytext] => Sitting alone in this room and thinking what i ever did wrong,
was i too late or was i in friendzone,
it's killing me that i know it never will be us,
but im still thinking that we could be the best couple in the world,
you are so sweet that i can't describe it honey,
if you only know what i am thinking about you the whole day, then i think you will be in chock,
cuz i am thinking so much about each day and i can't stop it, even if i will,
i still dreaming of you every night and it's killing me that in that dreams i have you in my arms,
and when i woke up then it feels that you really are in my arms but you are'nt
i think i never will come over you 100 % but one day maybe i will,
if just that day was tommorow,

forkuzz, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 1 poem for each one you submit.

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Sadness is the pain

Contributed by forkuzz on Sunday, 10th June 2012 @ 04:48:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Sitting alone in this room and thinking what i ever did wrong,
was i too late or was i in friendzone,
it's killing me that i know it never will be us,
but im still thinking that we could be the best couple in the world,
you are so sweet that i can't describe it honey,
if you only know what i am thinking about you the whole day, then i think you will be in chock,
cuz i am thinking so much about each day and i can't stop it, even if i will,
i still dreaming of you every night and it's killing me that in that dreams i have you in my arms,
and when i woke up then it feels that you really are in my arms but you are'nt
i think i never will come over you 100 % but one day maybe i will,
if just that day was tommorow,

forkuzz, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 1 poem for each one you submit.

Copyright © forkuzz ... [ 2012-06-10 16:48:53]
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Re: Sadness is the pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Ellewood on Sunday, 10th June 2012 @ 04:59:40 PM AEST
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love is such a strong emotion...what does it do us...well it makes us feel happy,sad and excited sometimes all at the same time. It's funny how one thing could stir up so many different emotions in us. good luck to you ...nice writing

Re: Sadness is the pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Anara on Sunday, 10th June 2012 @ 05:07:52 PM AEST
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Powerful emotions in a good poem.

Re: Sadness is the pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 10th June 2012 @ 06:52:39 PM AEST
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I like the raw emotion in this. Work on your rhythym and your writing will be better.

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