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No one there to hold you tight

The covers strangle you as you try to escape
The lonely thoughts as you realize your fate

Far away, far apart
I’m here with a broken heart

3000 miles, and only 3 days away
I’ll find my way back, I’ll be there to stay

I’ll find you there, on that bed
Swimming in blankets, full of dread

It won’t last, not for long
It will fade away with the passing of dawn

3000 miles, 3 days away
I’m coming home, I’m there to stay
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3000 Miles

Contributed by malinsinbigler on Friday, 13th July 2012 @ 05:14:34 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

One blanket and a cold dark night
No one there to hold you tight

The covers strangle you as you try to escape
The lonely thoughts as you realize your fate

Far away, far apart
I’m here with a broken heart

3000 miles, and only 3 days away
I’ll find my way back, I’ll be there to stay

I’ll find you there, on that bed
Swimming in blankets, full of dread

It won’t last, not for long
It will fade away with the passing of dawn

3000 miles, 3 days away
I’m coming home, I’m there to stay

Copyright Â© malinsinbigler ... [ 2012-07-13 17:14:34]
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Re: 3000 Miles (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th July 2012 @ 09:25:09 PM AEST
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Nice! Really enjoyed reading this!

Re: 3000 Miles (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Sunday, 15th July 2012 @ 05:05:02 AM AEST
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i liked reading it! It has a lot of meaning to it, you should write more often. Keep it up!

Wayne

Re: 3000 Miles (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Sunday, 29th July 2012 @ 06:05:14 PM AEST
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Well they do say absence makes the heart grow fonder.
The good thing about someone being away is the moment they walk back through that door :)

Steve

Re: 3000 Miles (User Rating: 1 )
by velvet_rose94 on Thursday, 25th October 2012 @ 01:16:10 PM AEST
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Don't forget she was on the bed with your smelly gross hoodie. How come all your best work is when your fiancee is either far away or with you?

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