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Array ( [sid] => 173435 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The way I see [time] => 2012-07-24 13:55:00 [hometext] => this is what happens when i get too bored [bodytext] => we spend our whole life planning
the things we want to do
but so many of us fail
& our dreams do not come true

we turn to our resources
to build another dream
we've lost our expectations
or at least thats what it seems

we try not to get discouraged
in this game we're forced to play
the game is called reality
& it changes everyday

you pick up all your peices
then you put them in a row
but the game is over half way threw
before you even know

by the time that we understand
the real game we call life
it seems to cut us deeper
than any kind of knife

this is just my opinion
each has their own to see
so rather mine is right or wrong
it still belongs to me
the hot shot poet [comments] => 1 [counter] => 139 [topic] => 25 [informant] => thehotshotpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

The way I see

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 01:55:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

we spend our whole life planning
the things we want to do
but so many of us fail
& our dreams do not come true

we turn to our resources
to build another dream
we've lost our expectations
or at least thats what it seems

we try not to get discouraged
in this game we're forced to play
the game is called reality
& it changes everyday

you pick up all your peices
then you put them in a row
but the game is over half way threw
before you even know

by the time that we understand
the real game we call life
it seems to cut us deeper
than any kind of knife

this is just my opinion
each has their own to see
so rather mine is right or wrong
it still belongs to me
the hot shot poet

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-07-24 13:55:00]
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Re: The way I see (User Rating: 1 )
by CommasCanSeperate on Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 03:03:05 PM AEST
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Brilliant really nice write. I thoroughly enjoyed it. :D

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