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Teddy bear
Contributed by
anara
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Friday, 27th July 2012 @ 09:13:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I sit in the corner
Broken and used
Bruised from your tight hugs
Stained with your shed tears
I am here when you need me
I don't say a word
No clue why you keep me
In fact I find it absurd
I am not worth your time
Unless you're beaten and down
During your happier times
I am never around
I am just your teddy bear
Until your weight puts me in the ground
Copyright ©
anara
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2012-07-27 21:13:42]
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Re: Teddy bear
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by TCK on
Saturday, 28th July 2012 @ 12:10:56 AM AEST
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I LIKE!! Nice coming from the Teddy Bear's point of view. Excellently written. Even inanimate objects like Teddy Bears can help us through alot of things. They take alot of abuse from us; it's a good thing they don't have feelings, or I think we would really hurt them.
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Re: Teddy bear
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by soulsongs on
Saturday, 28th July 2012 @ 08:04:24 AM AEST
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| Awww... cheer up Teddy Bear - you serve a great purpose! Nice poem ;) |
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Re: Teddy bear
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 29th July 2012 @ 05:23:48 PM AEST
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That was different, wasn't expecting that.
True though, teddy bears do seem to become the emotional mop!!!
Wonder what happens when a teddy bear is feeling down?
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