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Standing here, frozen by fear, I feel I must do something.

The light within has grown so dim; the sunshine of my being.

A cold grey darkness fills my soul; an empty lifeless feeling.

I try to smile and lift my eyes and think a happy thought.

My thinking is dead and I find instead; all happiness is lost.

Where is the life I had as a child the happy free existence?

Gone away, leaving me to face life where hope seems missing. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 32 [informant] => markmark [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Empty

Contributed by markmark on Friday, 3rd August 2012 @ 03:10:38 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Today just like so many days I waste away to nothing.

Standing here, frozen by fear, I feel I must do something.

The light within has grown so dim; the sunshine of my being.

A cold grey darkness fills my soul; an empty lifeless feeling.

I try to smile and lift my eyes and think a happy thought.

My thinking is dead and I find instead; all happiness is lost.

Where is the life I had as a child the happy free existence?

Gone away, leaving me to face life where hope seems missing.

Copyright © markmark ... [ 2012-08-03 15:10:38]
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Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Friday, 3rd August 2012 @ 03:18:04 PM AEST
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When happiness is gone,
and your life blood drains away,
something needs to change,
and it needs to change today.

:) good luck feeling better.

Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Friday, 3rd August 2012 @ 04:13:09 PM AEST
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Hello, I think i understand how you feel as i too have had these times in my life. May i ask you to read some of my poems as i feel maybe they hold a key to some of the answers you search? You are the one that holds the key to the chamber of your emotions. If you are able to write a poem of such, then you have the ability to find happiness with in that chamber. Life is great, even on a sad day! Open yourself up and don't be anonymous, let people know your alive. Fill the world with your thoughts and find reasons that allow happiness in you to be alive.

Wayne!

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