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this is what i'd do
I'd bust it all to peices
& send the sand to you

just so you could take each grain
& toss one everyday
untill you get to aggrivated
& throw them all away

you give me that impression
the way you dissappear
you dont even say goodbye
your just no longer here

no doupt you do have issues
I cannot figure out
I hope you can contain them
but I really have my doupts

your life is at a stop light
& it seems that it is stuck
but do not stand under it
for you know you have no luck

if your life is to go anywhere
it's you you have to change
it cannot be a coverup
your life must rearrange

this path that you are stuck on
has done nothing but made pain
it will leave you with no shelter
in the pouring rain

so as I extend my hand
let me pull you away
so you might find shelter
& a much better way
the hot shot poet
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what friends do

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Saturday, 4th August 2012 @ 09:40:48 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

if I had an hourglass
this is what i'd do
I'd bust it all to peices
& send the sand to you

just so you could take each grain
& toss one everyday
untill you get to aggrivated
& throw them all away

you give me that impression
the way you dissappear
you dont even say goodbye
your just no longer here

no doupt you do have issues
I cannot figure out
I hope you can contain them
but I really have my doupts

your life is at a stop light
& it seems that it is stuck
but do not stand under it
for you know you have no luck

if your life is to go anywhere
it's you you have to change
it cannot be a coverup
your life must rearrange

this path that you are stuck on
has done nothing but made pain
it will leave you with no shelter
in the pouring rain

so as I extend my hand
let me pull you away
so you might find shelter
& a much better way
the hot shot poet

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-08-04 21:40:48]
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Re: what friends do (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th August 2012 @ 10:39:19 PM AEST
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I don't know how they know it, it's undiscovered, yet coveted in the back of ones mind. You pass it off, like I suppose they do. But your poem tells the truth, of being bored, watching the day, or the grass grow. All the crassness you know about yourself, you mention strong, real, truth.
I don't know, what poetry is. You wrote what I think as well.

Peace!

Re: what friends do (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Sunday, 5th August 2012 @ 04:08:33 AM AEST
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Well hotshotpoet, it seems you have pulled
out another amazing poem. The truth is what
It is. What a Lucky friend to be blessed with
Someone like you who wants to help. I'm sure
Whom ever it is is grateful, to you.
I love it....Shirlee

Re: what friends do (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Sunday, 5th August 2012 @ 04:11:31 AM AEST
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Well hotshotpoet, it seems you have pulled
out another amazing poem. The truth is what
It is. What a Lucky friend to be blessed with
Someone like you who wants to help. I'm sure
Whom ever it is is grateful, to you.
I love it....Shirlee

Re: what friends do (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Sunday, 5th August 2012 @ 07:34:36 AM AEST
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Hot Shot, you did it again! This poem is music to my ears. Your poetry flows like blessings from heaven. Man, you are a really good writer. I am glad we have become friends. Keep on writing my friend, you're awesome.

Wayne

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