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to change the way you are
the way youve made your life to be
has changed a scratch into a scar

I have known you all your life
but I cant defend what I dont know
you have chose the path youre walking down
not knowing where youll go

you have chosen all the wrong things
in the life you choose to live
your giving what you call happiness
but you have none to give

it seems what you call happeness
is your nose stuck to a pill
well cant never could untill he tried
& you probably never will

I'm ashamed of what I've found out
& I have no doupt it's true
I hope that you will seek some help
before it destroys you

I have written you this poem
to try to say to you goodbye
I will not stay in your life
& simply watch you die

so just look in your mirror
& reflect on what you see
what your looking at is sad
a self inflickted tragedy
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I cant help you

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Friday, 17th August 2012 @ 07:14:25 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

there is nothing I can do
to change the way you are
the way youve made your life to be
has changed a scratch into a scar

I have known you all your life
but I cant defend what I dont know
you have chose the path youre walking down
not knowing where youll go

you have chosen all the wrong things
in the life you choose to live
your giving what you call happiness
but you have none to give

it seems what you call happeness
is your nose stuck to a pill
well cant never could untill he tried
& you probably never will

I'm ashamed of what I've found out
& I have no doupt it's true
I hope that you will seek some help
before it destroys you

I have written you this poem
to try to say to you goodbye
I will not stay in your life
& simply watch you die

so just look in your mirror
& reflect on what you see
what your looking at is sad
a self inflickted tragedy
the hot shot poet

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-08-17 07:14:25]
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Re: I cant help you (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Friday, 17th August 2012 @ 09:43:22 AM AEST
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People make their lives what they are and unfortunately
There isn't much we can do, we can turn away without
Completely walking away, leaving the option of when and if
You. Need me I'm here open. Everyones breaking point or
Rock bottom is different an you can't save people from themselves, or the drama that comes with their life's journey. Only God can do what needs to be done and all one has to do is call on him
People have to want help

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