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Array ( [sid] => 173651 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Trainwreck [time] => 2012-08-21 03:49:41 [hometext] => I've talked to this girl, through my job, for many years, and never saw her face. I take a chance and go out to meet someone, and a trainwreck of emotions flood when we found out who each other was. [bodytext] => 2 lives riddled with harmful memories.
Feeling empty and broke inside.
Wishing for something new.

2 lives on parallel track,
Running side by side,
and without a clue.

Eventually the tracks intersected.
Followed by a great collision,
A wreck of sensation, and unknown emotion
Feeling so out of control.

Once the smoke vanished, and the picture was clear,
There was a great reason, that wasn't so near.
That this happened without question
And though we are still yet unsure why
I'm willing to find out,
The reason we're here. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 54 [informant] => Froggy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

The Trainwreck

Contributed by Froggy on Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 03:49:41 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

2 lives riddled with harmful memories.
Feeling empty and broke inside.
Wishing for something new.

2 lives on parallel track,
Running side by side,
and without a clue.

Eventually the tracks intersected.
Followed by a great collision,
A wreck of sensation, and unknown emotion
Feeling so out of control.

Once the smoke vanished, and the picture was clear,
There was a great reason, that wasn't so near.
That this happened without question
And though we are still yet unsure why
I'm willing to find out,
The reason we're here.

Copyright © Froggy ... [ 2012-08-21 03:49:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Trainwreck (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 07:54:08 AM AEST
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As beautifully written as this is your title was misleading
But I must say I was drawn in to the suspensfull story
that deserves. Sequel now I wanna know what you two
were to each other. I love your style

Re: The Trainwreck (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 08:05:18 AM AEST
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I truly enjoyed the suspense
everything happens for a reason
-as we all have reasons,we do things the way we do

Well written

-UNORTHODOX

Re: The Trainwreck (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd August 2012 @ 03:42:09 AM AEST
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Great poem! I enjoyed every word it!

Re: The Trainwreck (User Rating: 1 )
by Ochonochar on Thursday, 23rd August 2012 @ 04:20:44 AM AEST
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Thought your poem was great.
I often wonder how different my life would be if just one of the decisions I have made through my life was different.
Remember the movie - Sliding Doors

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