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Array ( [sid] => 17404 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => disillusion [time] => 2003-05-11 11:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I seem to always try
To make everything ok
To make everyone see
There can be happiness everyday.

I try to help my friends
Trudge throught their confused minds
Thinking they would do the same
When I exhibit those same signs.

But now I see Im wrong
I see what isnt there
I make myself believe
That somewhere someone cares.

I now realize the truth
That no one's there for me
Why live in a darkened world
Where I see only what I want to see?

Soo Ill leave this depressing life
Add my name to the ever growing list
Finding solace in red rivers
Flowing from open wrists. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 290 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Haunted_Moonlight [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

disillusion

Contributed by Haunted_Moonlight on Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I seem to always try
To make everything ok
To make everyone see
There can be happiness everyday.

I try to help my friends
Trudge throught their confused minds
Thinking they would do the same
When I exhibit those same signs.

But now I see Im wrong
I see what isnt there
I make myself believe
That somewhere someone cares.

I now realize the truth
That no one's there for me
Why live in a darkened world
Where I see only what I want to see?

Soo Ill leave this depressing life
Add my name to the ever growing list
Finding solace in red rivers
Flowing from open wrists.

Copyright © Haunted_Moonlight ... [ 2003-05-11 11:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: disillusion (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 04:17:00 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc! I just love your name! Great poem too. Reminds me of a friend I have who feels the way you do. Believe it or not, there is always someone somewhere who cares. Blessed Be,

~ Moonlit Angel

Re: disillusion (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 08:58:02 AM AEST
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this is such a sad poem but so well written. the second from last stanza stands out to me the most.
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