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Array ( [sid] => 174077 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Red Mist [time] => 2012-10-22 15:35:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The red mist
blurs my vision
distorts my senses

Tauro Tauro

Jaw is twitching
fists clenched
My anxious surroundings
sliding out of view

Tauro Tauro

A stupid smirk
bares it's teeth
in a final sneer
my blood is now spitting
coarsing through searing veins
My face growing dangerously pale

TAURO TAURO

The red mist
boiling bloods condensation

TAURO TAURO

In a wild wicked haze
a smack and a wail
gasps on mortified faces as restrained arms flail
something malignant now cowers pathetically on the floor

breath still hard
thoughts still wild

in time the red mist will dissipate
my heaving chest will begin to deflate
the ugly echo of fragments of sound it's sobering tones of dissapointment and disgust
will hurl me back into conciousness
and with a sullen face and artificial answer

I will apologise

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Red Mist

Contributed by flavellm on Monday, 22nd October 2012 @ 03:35:39 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

The red mist
blurs my vision
distorts my senses

Tauro Tauro

Jaw is twitching
fists clenched
My anxious surroundings
sliding out of view

Tauro Tauro

A stupid smirk
bares it's teeth
in a final sneer
my blood is now spitting
coarsing through searing veins
My face growing dangerously pale

TAURO TAURO

The red mist
boiling bloods condensation

TAURO TAURO

In a wild wicked haze
a smack and a wail
gasps on mortified faces as restrained arms flail
something malignant now cowers pathetically on the floor

breath still hard
thoughts still wild

in time the red mist will dissipate
my heaving chest will begin to deflate
the ugly echo of fragments of sound it's sobering tones of dissapointment and disgust
will hurl me back into conciousness
and with a sullen face and artificial answer

I will apologise

Copyright © flavellm ... [ 2012-10-22 15:35:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Red Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by ValDohren on Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 09:16:16 AM AEST
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Excellent write - very descriptive.
Val

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