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Array ( [sid] => 174183 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This lonely sea. [time] => 2012-11-02 00:27:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The taste of this war lays heavy on my tongue 
Words drip from my lips  like gun powder bombs and rattle the foundation of your sick silent calm
Nestled along the boundary 
You found me
Back and forth to past and present tense
This is my life after death
The way your shotgun shells still ring out like wedding bells 
Sometimes I forget to remember 
I cannot rewrite this tragedy
This is how it had to be
And I won't apologize for what I need to be 
I won't apologize for bleeding into this lonely sea 
So Shoot me dead and repent your sins
I'll never back down from what lies within
Invade my skin with those razor blade eyes
Bleed me dry with the lies 
There's no mistake
11 years and steady true
I'm an empire devoted to you
Oh...cradle my throat...love me until I'm blue...
I'd die for you
A thousand times
Live a thousand lives
Fight a million wars
It's sick...it's sick how much I love you...
Just pull the trigger and shoot that gun....
I'm done. 

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This lonely sea.

Contributed by Bleedthelove on Friday, 2nd November 2012 @ 12:27:18 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



The taste of this war lays heavy on my tongue 
Words drip from my lips  like gun powder bombs and rattle the foundation of your sick silent calm
Nestled along the boundary 
You found me
Back and forth to past and present tense
This is my life after death
The way your shotgun shells still ring out like wedding bells 
Sometimes I forget to remember 
I cannot rewrite this tragedy
This is how it had to be
And I won't apologize for what I need to be 
I won't apologize for bleeding into this lonely sea 
So Shoot me dead and repent your sins
I'll never back down from what lies within
Invade my skin with those razor blade eyes
Bleed me dry with the lies 
There's no mistake
11 years and steady true
I'm an empire devoted to you
Oh...cradle my throat...love me until I'm blue...
I'd die for you
A thousand times
Live a thousand lives
Fight a million wars
It's sick...it's sick how much I love you...
Just pull the trigger and shoot that gun....
I'm done. 





Copyright © Bleedthelove ... [ 2012-11-02 00:27:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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