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attention to detail
Contributed by
LetYourFeelingsOut
on
Tuesday, 13th November 2012 @ 10:35:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Dots on the cieling
Shapes on the wall
I am not able to count them all
Blinds on the window
Blocking the sun
What has this world become?
Faces frown they look around
Endless happiness
Its really rare !
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2012-11-13 10:35:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: attention to detail
(User Rating: 1 ) by colinb on
Wednesday, 20th March 2013 @ 04:36:29 PM AEST (User
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Very creative & beautifully said |
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