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Array ( [sid] => 174318 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Everlasting Lie [time] => 2012-11-17 14:47:51 [hometext] => I only write what is in my heart [bodytext] => it's hard to believe
that someone such as I
could be living in the moment
of an everlasting lie

the dreams they've all been shattered
disappearing from my sight
although I am still hanging on
& trying with all my might

I have not once cheated
in any kind of way
but something deep inside of me
says it's the words she's gonna say

I pledged loyalty to my marriage
with all I have inside my heart
I never thought Loyalty
would pull my world apart

if you felt a quiver inside your heart
well trust me so did I
now you see why I am living in
an everlasting lie

when you tell your love you love her
it's not all you have to do
we all must learn to show it
show the love you have so true

if you miss your chance with these words
to find a way to show it
you can bet that I missed mine
& I'm the hot shot poet

Roy Randolph Andrews AKA (thehotshotpoet0

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Everlasting Lie

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Saturday, 17th November 2012 @ 02:47:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

it's hard to believe
that someone such as I
could be living in the moment
of an everlasting lie

the dreams they've all been shattered
disappearing from my sight
although I am still hanging on
& trying with all my might

I have not once cheated
in any kind of way
but something deep inside of me
says it's the words she's gonna say

I pledged loyalty to my marriage
with all I have inside my heart
I never thought Loyalty
would pull my world apart

if you felt a quiver inside your heart
well trust me so did I
now you see why I am living in
an everlasting lie

when you tell your love you love her
it's not all you have to do
we all must learn to show it
show the love you have so true

if you miss your chance with these words
to find a way to show it
you can bet that I missed mine
& I'm the hot shot poet

Roy Randolph Andrews AKA (thehotshotpoet0

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2012-11-17 14:47:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Everlasting Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Saturday, 24th November 2012 @ 09:25:27 PM AEST
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This is a wonderfully written poem full of emotion and to me the is a sadness to it. I'm sorry for what your going through. I hope things work out for you

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