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Swollen by wickedness,weakened by the falsely kind
Twisted threads of compromise rendered my soul trivial
Unnoticed by you this heart began to shrivel
By the age of twelve my elegance had been busted
Seperated by a doctor from the only one I trusted
Abadoned in the garden as doctor got her committed
Choosing then a grey cloak of tragedy which already had been fitted
Within my family have those memories now faded ?
It's not a culture where all that careless stuff gets paraded
Listening to the man of rhymes that voice now shattered
Maybe Visions of Johanna the only song that mattered
Never met my muse though several times got a siting
Emerald Isle lying in peace though in Gaza still there is fighting
Godless rabii plots fresh settlements on a faded map
While he tosses this prophet from his bloodied lap
Take your rest sweetheart , you will never glimpse these lines
Instead shift your gaze inwards,see there the golden signs [comments] => 1 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 71 [informant] => trebor [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )

The Tempest

Contributed by trebor on Saturday, 17th November 2012 @ 03:54:28 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

Inside this tomb lay to rest a shattered mind
Swollen by wickedness,weakened by the falsely kind
Twisted threads of compromise rendered my soul trivial
Unnoticed by you this heart began to shrivel
By the age of twelve my elegance had been busted
Seperated by a doctor from the only one I trusted
Abadoned in the garden as doctor got her committed
Choosing then a grey cloak of tragedy which already had been fitted
Within my family have those memories now faded ?
It's not a culture where all that careless stuff gets paraded
Listening to the man of rhymes that voice now shattered
Maybe Visions of Johanna the only song that mattered
Never met my muse though several times got a siting
Emerald Isle lying in peace though in Gaza still there is fighting
Godless rabii plots fresh settlements on a faded map
While he tosses this prophet from his bloodied lap
Take your rest sweetheart , you will never glimpse these lines
Instead shift your gaze inwards,see there the golden signs

Copyright © trebor ... [ 2012-11-17 15:54:28]
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Re: The Tempest (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 19th November 2012 @ 03:10:07 AM AEST
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Sad but expertly written.
Great job.
Blessings, huggs,
emy

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