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I’m trying to find the will…the will to proceed.
You were my life,
The reason I am, the reason I would breathe.
I gave you my all,
My mind, Heart and Soul and now I find it hard to live.
You left without any explanation.
Just leaving me a note,
Written in a notebook.
Saying that you could no longer be with me,
And how unhappy you were.
How could I have been so blind to fact.
Why didn’t I see it coming…so I could react and fix what was wrong.
I miss your very essence.
The sweet smell of your fragrance,
The warmth of your body that lied to next to me at night,
With your beautiful presence.
People say this is part of life’s lessons.
I refuse to believe that.
I feel at moments I cant breathe…why, why did you leave.
The signs were written on the wall,
To blind to fact to even see it all.
My love bleeds for you.
My heart cries for.
My soul yearns for you.
All I am now is an empty shell of person who used to be a man.
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Empty

Contributed by desciple on Sunday, 9th December 2012 @ 10:34:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I’m trying to figure it out still,
I’m trying to find the will…the will to proceed.
You were my life,
The reason I am, the reason I would breathe.
I gave you my all,
My mind, Heart and Soul and now I find it hard to live.
You left without any explanation.
Just leaving me a note,
Written in a notebook.
Saying that you could no longer be with me,
And how unhappy you were.
How could I have been so blind to fact.
Why didn’t I see it coming…so I could react and fix what was wrong.
I miss your very essence.
The sweet smell of your fragrance,
The warmth of your body that lied to next to me at night,
With your beautiful presence.
People say this is part of life’s lessons.
I refuse to believe that.
I feel at moments I cant breathe…why, why did you leave.
The signs were written on the wall,
To blind to fact to even see it all.
My love bleeds for you.
My heart cries for.
My soul yearns for you.
All I am now is an empty shell of person who used to be a man.

Copyright Â© desciple ... [ 2012-12-09 22:34:55]
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Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 02:27:22 PM AEST
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heartbreaking and beautifully bittersweet,

hugs n' love nessa

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