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[title] => This Room
[time] => 2013-01-23 05:54:10
[hometext] => Short poem called this room enjoy.
[bodytext] => This room is small and depressing. This room that should only be used when im resting. This room is my home inside of my home. This room is the place to go when im alone. I leave this room on occasion and such, but I feel that this room has become like a crutch. This room is as dark as the night with no stars. This room always quiet like a street with no cars. Im locked in this room and I threw out the key. This room would be nothing at all without me. This room with 4 walls staring at you. These walls in this room give you nothing to do. You leave for a while but the room shudders and calls. You think back to that room with those glaring 4 walls. Alone in this room once again void of light. Alone in this room once again with no sight, but even if there was light and I could see. There would be nothing to see in this room accept me.
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This Room
Contributed by
sampsonanddelilah
on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2013 @ 05:54:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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This room is small and depressing. This room that should only be used when im resting. This room is my home inside of my home. This room is the place to go when im alone. I leave this room on occasion and such, but I feel that this room has become like a crutch. This room is as dark as the night with no stars. This room always quiet like a street with no cars. Im locked in this room and I threw out the key. This room would be nothing at all without me. This room with 4 walls staring at you. These walls in this room give you nothing to do. You leave for a while but the room shudders and calls. You think back to that room with those glaring 4 walls. Alone in this room once again void of light. Alone in this room once again with no sight, but even if there was light and I could see. There would be nothing to see in this room accept me.
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Re: This Room
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2013 @ 08:15:24 AM AEST
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Very creative writing.
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Re: This Room
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by UNORTHODOX on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2013 @ 12:48:56 PM AEST
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I feel this poem deeply.
It's comfortably sad and truly sincere.
There's something more that really
makes this...well, real(vivid).
Well done
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Re: This Room
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 13th March 2013 @ 08:01:04 AM AEST
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| enjoyed this peace with its great flow.Wonderful way to express the effect of a room on ones awareness of being alone .ND |
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