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Array ( [sid] => 174905 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Nether [time] => 2013-01-25 13:20:26 [hometext] => spoken word.. leave some criticism please, [bodytext] =>



The Netherness

It's A Place Of Stress When Im Alone And Regressed
Where Happyness Becomes A Taste To Posess But Bitterness
Be My Guest
Neglects Me To Take Steps

To My Purpose

Got Me Searchin...

Searching Mapquest For The Right Left
Cause I Left Right
The Moment I Put The Right Left To My Dad's Chest
My Right's Left

Lurking...
Lurking For The Bill
Like Maybe Ill Find It In This Bottle Of Tequil
I Swallow My Bottled Emotions Hollow
Hold Still...

Into The Netherness
Where Gravity Holds No Will To My Mind
So My Eyes Freefall To Her Hips...
I
do
lize
As I Wander Through Her Thigh's In Search Of A Tip
I Gather These Dimes Until They Start To Make Sense(Cents) Of My Senselessness

Doven Into Her Innocence These Oceans Hide Where Her True Value Exists
So I Float...

In The
Netherness I Need Hope Like The Hangman Needs Rope
Just To Choke Out An Answer Already Known

Like I Know I Gave Up When Dad Left Home
Treated School Like A Prepaid Phone
Acted A Fool While My Mom's Left Alone
Sadness My Throne Led To A Rebel Gone Rogue
My Throne Overthrown To The Netherness I was Thrown...

But Even Then I Rise Like Horizons On Eyes And Chase Down Victory Until It's Eyes Meet Mine
And I Lift The Curse
And You WILL Feel My Words

Even If I have to Stick Lead In My Throat And Scream A Note
Just To Make Sure You Hear My POINT

Lord Do You Hear My Voice?

And Those Will Hear My Voice
When You Enter
The Netherness
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 117 [topic] => 61 [informant] => jdioo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
The Nether

Contributed by jdioo on Friday, 25th January 2013 @ 01:20:26 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles







The Netherness

It's A Place Of Stress When Im Alone And Regressed
Where Happyness Becomes A Taste To Posess But Bitterness
Be My Guest
Neglects Me To Take Steps

To My Purpose

Got Me Searchin...

Searching Mapquest For The Right Left
Cause I Left Right
The Moment I Put The Right Left To My Dad's Chest
My Right's Left

Lurking...
Lurking For The Bill
Like Maybe Ill Find It In This Bottle Of Tequil
I Swallow My Bottled Emotions Hollow
Hold Still...

Into The Netherness
Where Gravity Holds No Will To My Mind
So My Eyes Freefall To Her Hips...
I
do
lize
As I Wander Through Her Thigh's In Search Of A Tip
I Gather These Dimes Until They Start To Make Sense(Cents) Of My Senselessness

Doven Into Her Innocence These Oceans Hide Where Her True Value Exists
So I Float...

In The
Netherness I Need Hope Like The Hangman Needs Rope
Just To Choke Out An Answer Already Known

Like I Know I Gave Up When Dad Left Home
Treated School Like A Prepaid Phone
Acted A Fool While My Mom's Left Alone
Sadness My Throne Led To A Rebel Gone Rogue
My Throne Overthrown To The Netherness I was Thrown...

But Even Then I Rise Like Horizons On Eyes And Chase Down Victory Until It's Eyes Meet Mine
And I Lift The Curse
And You WILL Feel My Words

Even If I have to Stick Lead In My Throat And Scream A Note
Just To Make Sure You Hear My POINT

Lord Do You Hear My Voice?

And Those Will Hear My Voice
When You Enter
The Netherness




Copyright © jdioo ... [ 2013-01-25 13:20:26]
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Re: The Nether (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 26th January 2013 @ 04:20:59 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
You have a very creative way of thinking.
Blessings,
emy




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