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And silently watches it rain
She draws with her finger, a bride and groom
In her breath that's on the pane

Only twelve years old, and already grown
The chemo caused her to age
She'll never grow up and live on her own
She feels like she's trapped in a cage

She searches the window for locks of gold
Her reflection announces her shame
Her hair is all gone, she starts to look old
The cancer alone is the blame

Her breath once more, covers the glass
As a tear escapes to her cheek
She draws with her finger a stone in the grass
Her body keeps growing so weak

With one last breath she closes her eyes
And listens once more to the rain
She doesn't exhale, the little girl dies
Overcome by her horrible pain

A groom stands alone, frozen in glass
His bride was laid in the ground
Beside him stands a stone in the grass
Where the bride on the window is found [comments] => 3 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Whiskurz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Glass Wedding

Contributed by Whiskurz on Tuesday, 29th January 2013 @ 01:29:06 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

She sits all alone in an empty room
And silently watches it rain
She draws with her finger, a bride and groom
In her breath that's on the pane

Only twelve years old, and already grown
The chemo caused her to age
She'll never grow up and live on her own
She feels like she's trapped in a cage

She searches the window for locks of gold
Her reflection announces her shame
Her hair is all gone, she starts to look old
The cancer alone is the blame

Her breath once more, covers the glass
As a tear escapes to her cheek
She draws with her finger a stone in the grass
Her body keeps growing so weak

With one last breath she closes her eyes
And listens once more to the rain
She doesn't exhale, the little girl dies
Overcome by her horrible pain

A groom stands alone, frozen in glass
His bride was laid in the ground
Beside him stands a stone in the grass
Where the bride on the window is found

Copyright © Whiskurz ... [ 2013-01-29 13:29:06]
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Re: Glass Wedding (User Rating: 1 )
by Wordsmith123 on Wednesday, 30th January 2013 @ 12:12:08 AM AEST
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Haunting and beautiful. Well done.

Re: Glass Wedding (User Rating: 1 )
by EternitysLyre on Wednesday, 6th February 2013 @ 08:55:07 PM AEST
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Stone in the grass. You almost had me for a second there, that is no ordinary rock!

Of the many newcomers that I've seen show up on the sight, you've caught my attention a few times: you rhyme, you dream, and above all, you craft.

Thanks for the imagery.

Re: Glass Wedding (User Rating: 1 )
by katieliz on Thursday, 4th April 2013 @ 08:05:21 PM AEST
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this is a beautifully written piece

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