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I felt as if I was alone, locked in a tomb
More stress from a roommate so sneaky
It got better, when my problem ended, feeling cheeky

My week started getting better somewhere along the way
I could tell, Wednesday, that very day
The rest of the week started picking up
It felt as though the waitress had just refilled my cup

I started feeling the heaviness of the world lifting
My attention started drifting
Focusing on the fact, that I can get through
I just need to stay True

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Looking up

Contributed by kihr on Friday, 1st February 2013 @ 11:45:25 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

This week started out filled with doom and gloom
I felt as if I was alone, locked in a tomb
More stress from a roommate so sneaky
It got better, when my problem ended, feeling cheeky

My week started getting better somewhere along the way
I could tell, Wednesday, that very day
The rest of the week started picking up
It felt as though the waitress had just refilled my cup

I started feeling the heaviness of the world lifting
My attention started drifting
Focusing on the fact, that I can get through
I just need to stay True

Copyright © kihr ... [ 2013-02-01 11:45:25]
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Re: Looking up (User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on Friday, 1st February 2013 @ 01:41:17 PM AEST
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Your words carried the whisper of faith. I like the postive feel - and your words carried a smile. Very nice write. Thank you for sharing, P.

Re: Looking up (User Rating: 1 )
by Lenny on Saturday, 2nd February 2013 @ 07:32:37 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this. Also, excellent flow! Glad your week is getting better! :)

Re: Looking up (User Rating: 1 )
by Masonator on Monday, 4th February 2013 @ 10:01:48 PM AEST
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I really like this poem :) It's very relateable and has a very nice flow. Good job keep up the good work!

Re: Looking up (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Monday, 4th February 2013 @ 10:30:06 PM AEST
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well done stay true

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