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Array ( [sid] => 1756 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I chose you [time] => 2002-08-05 06:16:07 [hometext] => i wrote this for my dad [bodytext] => When I was younger,
I chose the man I thought was best,
And I chose you to be my dad.
I chose you before my father.
Doesn't that make you feel loved?
You and my mother,
Are not together anymore
But my love for you remains
I chose you over her new boyfriend
Doens't that show that I still care?
She argues with me
Yells and and scolls at me
Sometimes I don't understand why
But I'm still on your side!
I got mad at myself,
Because I chose you before my own mother!
Doesn't that make me a good daughter? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 25 [informant] => BluGurl6 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

I chose you

Contributed by BluGurl6 on Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 06:16:07 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

When I was younger,
I chose the man I thought was best,
And I chose you to be my dad.
I chose you before my father.
Doesn't that make you feel loved?
You and my mother,
Are not together anymore
But my love for you remains
I chose you over her new boyfriend
Doens't that show that I still care?
She argues with me
Yells and and scolls at me
Sometimes I don't understand why
But I'm still on your side!
I got mad at myself,
Because I chose you before my own mother!
Doesn't that make me a good daughter?

Copyright © BluGurl6 ... [ 2002-08-05 06:16:07]
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Re: I chose you (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 05:39:59 PM AEST
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Doesn't it hurt trying to please your parents? I've been through this battle before, and I've given up, now I just fight to please myself and what makes me happy. Just being yourself will always make you a good daughter... I've learned that in the past couple of years. Great write blu!
Gin

Re: I chose you (User Rating: 1 )
by Roshie on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 11:47:03 AM AEST
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I've never met my parents, so I couldn't possible understand what this must be like for you. But i understand how hard it is to choses between two people you love. I enjoyed this poem, very nicely written.

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