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Array ( [sid] => 175736 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Worthless [time] => 2013-04-13 21:28:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If you could see me now
See how I've changed
See how I've become the man
You always wanted in a man
You needed from me
to understand
You cried for me
to amend
My wrongdoings
Are always wrong
My funny jokes
Are always chokes
My friendly smile
Lasts a awhile
Until I disappoint you again
Until I offend
One of your friends
While I stand here and pretend
That I didn't see this coming
That I never thought you would make your last stand
Threw me out
230 in the morning
The cabs are plentiful
I have no where to sleep
No where to brush my teeth
The hookers are sinful
But your are mean
No where to shower or lay my self out
Punch myself square
Fare in the face
Keeping pace
With the self loathing disgrace
I have become a worthless pile of
Damn me
Damn all who I am
Enough of it
Damn this night
my life
I want to die
I want out of this lie
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 272 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Jyssvw [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Worthless

Contributed by Jyssvw on Saturday, 13th April 2013 @ 09:28:38 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

If you could see me now
See how I've changed
See how I've become the man
You always wanted in a man
You needed from me
to understand
You cried for me
to amend
My wrongdoings
Are always wrong
My funny jokes
Are always chokes
My friendly smile
Lasts a awhile
Until I disappoint you again
Until I offend
One of your friends
While I stand here and pretend
That I didn't see this coming
That I never thought you would make your last stand
Threw me out
230 in the morning
The cabs are plentiful
I have no where to sleep
No where to brush my teeth
The hookers are sinful
But your are mean
No where to shower or lay my self out
Punch myself square
Fare in the face
Keeping pace
With the self loathing disgrace
I have become a worthless pile of
Damn me
Damn all who I am
Enough of it
Damn this night
my life
I want to die
I want out of this lie

Copyright © Jyssvw ... [ 2013-04-13 21:28:38]
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Re: Worthless (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 14th April 2013 @ 01:19:58 PM AEST
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Very good writing but sad.
There's plenty of damnation on this planet with out you damning yourself.
I know you had to vent but you're just playing in the other persons trap. some people are miserable AND THEY WANT EVERY ONE TO BE MISERABLE WITH THEM. I mean you are A GOOD WRITER AND THAT'S a rare quality so be proud of your self if for nothing else. Do this and healing will come.
Big huggs, blessings,
emy

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