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Array ( [sid] => 175884 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dormis [time] => 2013-04-28 23:42:47 [hometext] => The stars spell out our fate [bodytext] => Looking through my mind I feel lost
Searching for comfort, no matter the cost
Whatever makes me happy
I look quick, searching snappy
Finding nothing I quickly despair
My heart broken beyond compare
I feel nothing inside, I am broken
The feeling of depression awoken
Confused I look to the night sky
I ask myself who am I
The stars reveal nothing
Nothing but sadness does this bring
I can't fathom my place
Looking at the stars in space
Seemingly to fabricate our existence
Giving love not resistance
Maybe this is why I weep
Maybe this is why I cannot sleep...

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Dormis

Contributed by ScribereHabeo on Sunday, 28th April 2013 @ 11:42:47 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Looking through my mind I feel lost
Searching for comfort, no matter the cost
Whatever makes me happy
I look quick, searching snappy
Finding nothing I quickly despair
My heart broken beyond compare
I feel nothing inside, I am broken
The feeling of depression awoken
Confused I look to the night sky
I ask myself who am I
The stars reveal nothing
Nothing but sadness does this bring
I can't fathom my place
Looking at the stars in space
Seemingly to fabricate our existence
Giving love not resistance
Maybe this is why I weep
Maybe this is why I cannot sleep...

Copyright © ScribereHabeo ... [ 2013-04-28 23:42:47]
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Re: Dormis (User Rating: 1 )
by Devilish1 on Monday, 29th April 2013 @ 03:50:52 AM AEST
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Hello there .. this was beautifully expressed.. i feel you on every level here. i know what your going through, nice to meet you ..

Re: Dormis (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Tuesday, 30th April 2013 @ 05:39:25 AM AEST
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The sad truth of reality. We must establish our own subjective worlds and in them, our identity, and even our purpose. For existence isn't kind, and neither is the world. We cannot create our beginnings, but we can help with establishment of our ends.

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