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Array ( [sid] => 176149 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Slipping away part 2 [time] => 2013-05-25 14:04:54 [hometext] => I decided to write a second thanks for the support [bodytext] => Dust is blowing through the window
I held you close I knew you were lost
I had become older, merely a shadow
your lips were cold like frost

No longer do I remember your face
I never meant to forget
I held on to you just incase
Now all I do is regret

You have moved on to better things
I am happy but still in pain
I feel conflicted with the emotions that brings
As you walk into the rain

I can still hear you voice
It keeps my mind at bay
I left you and it was my choice
I forgot you, but youre okay

I cant see anymore
you came to find me some day
I had no love to live for
My heart and mind were gone
My life had slipped away

Maybe we will meet some day
I cant wait till I see you
Maybe you will also slip away
I cant wait till I can love you...

I will let a river of tears flow
and I will never let you go...... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 88 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ScribereHabeo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Slipping away part 2

Contributed by ScribereHabeo on Saturday, 25th May 2013 @ 02:04:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Dust is blowing through the window
I held you close I knew you were lost
I had become older, merely a shadow
your lips were cold like frost

No longer do I remember your face
I never meant to forget
I held on to you just incase
Now all I do is regret

You have moved on to better things
I am happy but still in pain
I feel conflicted with the emotions that brings
As you walk into the rain

I can still hear you voice
It keeps my mind at bay
I left you and it was my choice
I forgot you, but youre okay

I cant see anymore
you came to find me some day
I had no love to live for
My heart and mind were gone
My life had slipped away

Maybe we will meet some day
I cant wait till I see you
Maybe you will also slip away
I cant wait till I can love you...

I will let a river of tears flow
and I will never let you go......




Copyright © ScribereHabeo ... [ 2013-05-25 14:04:54]
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Re: Slipping away part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Sommer on Saturday, 25th May 2013 @ 04:04:22 PM AEST
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That was beautiful!!! Thank you so much for finishing it. I love the emotions thrown into it.




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