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Array ( [sid] => 176152 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Our song [time] => 2013-05-25 16:16:48 [hometext] => One of my favorite songs I've written. [bodytext] => I looked back into the past
When we still thought that this would last
Should have never brought it up like that
Because I miss you now
And won't be missed back

You said I had to let you go
But it feels like time goes by so slow
Without you my worlds dark and cold
But I try for you because I know
You said that we should just be friends
And that we were to broken to mend
Ill live with that, but wounds open
everytime I hear our song again

I deleted messages I saved
Had to learn to throw it all away
Cause the memories cause too much pain
But my heart still breaks when I hear your name
So I'm playing out my role with you
Even though inside I'm dying to
Touch the way we used to do
Cause I must confess I still love you

But you said I had to let you go
And I'm sorry for bringing this up
You left me in the darkness cold
Don't want to do this anymore
You wanted me to be your friend
And I love you so ill play pretend
Guess this is how our story ends
Never want to hear our song again

Can never listen to our song again

It'll never be our song again.... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 140 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Sommer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Our song

Contributed by Sommer on Saturday, 25th May 2013 @ 04:16:48 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



I looked back into the past
When we still thought that this would last
Should have never brought it up like that
Because I miss you now
And won't be missed back

You said I had to let you go
But it feels like time goes by so slow
Without you my worlds dark and cold
But I try for you because I know
You said that we should just be friends
And that we were to broken to mend
Ill live with that, but wounds open
everytime I hear our song again

I deleted messages I saved
Had to learn to throw it all away
Cause the memories cause too much pain
But my heart still breaks when I hear your name
So I'm playing out my role with you
Even though inside I'm dying to
Touch the way we used to do
Cause I must confess I still love you

But you said I had to let you go
And I'm sorry for bringing this up
You left me in the darkness cold
Don't want to do this anymore
You wanted me to be your friend
And I love you so ill play pretend
Guess this is how our story ends
Never want to hear our song again

Can never listen to our song again

It'll never be our song again....




Copyright © Sommer ... [ 2013-05-25 16:16:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Our song (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 25th May 2013 @ 04:45:36 PM AEST
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Great writing.
Blessings,
emy




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