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Array ( [sid] => 176340 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => take the chance [time] => 2013-06-21 15:14:17 [hometext] => this is pretty straight out.. from the depths of my little soul [bodytext] => strong but yet weak
don't be foolish
you have it right there take your opportunity
while it stands

shes an angel in disguise
feelings can't be denied
she is willing to be yours
she left the open door
don't let her fly away

bitterness will turn to memories forgotten
demons will be released
she has the answers she will help you through all things

a special bond is shared
that comes close to never
take her as she stands ready for you
don't be like the masses who want to kick their own asses (later)

Shes here and then she's gone so take her while she stands for you..

Vampyress jenni [comments] => 2 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 48 [informant] => phantomvampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

take the chance

Contributed by phantomvampyress on Friday, 21st June 2013 @ 03:14:17 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

strong but yet weak
don't be foolish
you have it right there take your opportunity
while it stands

shes an angel in disguise
feelings can't be denied
she is willing to be yours
she left the open door
don't let her fly away

bitterness will turn to memories forgotten
demons will be released
she has the answers she will help you through all things

a special bond is shared
that comes close to never
take her as she stands ready for you
don't be like the masses who want to kick their own asses (later)

Shes here and then she's gone so take her while she stands for you..

Vampyress jenni

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Re: take the chance (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 22nd June 2013 @ 10:22:44 PM AEST
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Hey :)

It's lovely to see how much you have grown over the years. This poem proves it, it's much deeper than the older stuff that I remember.

Nice to see you posting :)

Phyllis x

Re: take the chance (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 02:16:19 PM AEST
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bitterness will turn to memories forgotten
truly an indepth beautiful line, this is heartfelt and
flows gently across the page,

hugs n' love nessa

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