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Array ( [sid] => 176369 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sob Story [time] => 2013-06-24 07:12:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Humbled by own ignorance
Never thought this could happen to me
Secure in a place I longed to be
Suddenly tossed like waste
Into the streets of despair
Littering the path
To a future no longer there
Looking to you for support
But you no longer care

A fool to believe
I was above reproach
Easy to deceive
Such lovely elaborate cards you wrote
Words like forever and love thrown about
Never a hint of uneasiness uttered from your mouth
Never a red flag of dissolution hung in our house

A feeling of uncleanliness washes over my body
The loneliness wages wars
Logic and emotional spirits torn
From the same misdirection
A formidable pain comes to grip my heart
Squeezes the life out of everyday
Sucking out whatever peace I have left
Parasitic in its attempt to steal from me any hope, pride and the slightest shred of dignity needed to see me through

Gone is the confidence one seeks in a man
Lost is the assurance of a positive outcome
The solitude solidifies my disposition
A desperate mess
Created by love
Destroyed by a stronger love that only time came build
A love that trust inhabited
Your touch is all imagined
Soft skin
Warm hands
Inviting lips
Wreaking havoc

The final goodbye is upon us
A last cry descends quickly
The gravity of the situation is not lost on the moment
The finality is palpable
Your acceptable and willingness to push through is unimaginable
Your mind is made up
Nothing I can do or say will change your heart
You know what it is that you want
More importantly , what you don't
What you had and now decided you would rather do without


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Sob Story

Contributed by Jyssvw22 on Monday, 24th June 2013 @ 07:12:53 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Humbled by own ignorance
Never thought this could happen to me
Secure in a place I longed to be
Suddenly tossed like waste
Into the streets of despair
Littering the path
To a future no longer there
Looking to you for support
But you no longer care

A fool to believe
I was above reproach
Easy to deceive
Such lovely elaborate cards you wrote
Words like forever and love thrown about
Never a hint of uneasiness uttered from your mouth
Never a red flag of dissolution hung in our house

A feeling of uncleanliness washes over my body
The loneliness wages wars
Logic and emotional spirits torn
From the same misdirection
A formidable pain comes to grip my heart
Squeezes the life out of everyday
Sucking out whatever peace I have left
Parasitic in its attempt to steal from me any hope, pride and the slightest shred of dignity needed to see me through

Gone is the confidence one seeks in a man
Lost is the assurance of a positive outcome
The solitude solidifies my disposition
A desperate mess
Created by love
Destroyed by a stronger love that only time came build
A love that trust inhabited
Your touch is all imagined
Soft skin
Warm hands
Inviting lips
Wreaking havoc

The final goodbye is upon us
A last cry descends quickly
The gravity of the situation is not lost on the moment
The finality is palpable
Your acceptable and willingness to push through is unimaginable
Your mind is made up
Nothing I can do or say will change your heart
You know what it is that you want
More importantly , what you don't
What you had and now decided you would rather do without


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Re: Sob Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Astronoe on Monday, 24th June 2013 @ 09:38:05 PM AEST
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A sad story, but a nicely written one.


Re: Sob Story (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 24th June 2013 @ 11:31:26 PM AEST
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So much sadness here.So sorry this is happening to you. Writing is good therapy, though this is so sad to read it is very good. I hope you will be ok and find peace in your broken heart.I hate to see anyone so sad.:(

Hugs
Michelle




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