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Array ( [sid] => 176395 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You [time] => 2013-06-28 19:11:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A shattered memory amidst a dream.
That's what you said,that's what i know.
So i leaned in your eyes to kiss,
and flick through the past as arrayed in your mind.

A saturated flourished meadow,
that light forsook and darkness reigned.
Flowers of death and trees of sin,
excuses dancing and lies running free.

A sky,that night now stole,
a sky she hid in the bays of Erebus.
What a gash that is felt,
devoid of the moon and ripped of the sun.

My hand arose to meet my lips,
to wipe the sorrow bleeding through.
I wanted to tell you,i wanted you to know
but my words barb inside me,my lips can not part.

My body weak,my sight darkened,
to my knees i crumble and lower my head.
A tear escapes my misty eyes,
heavily trickles and to the ground it thuds.

"What is this ruckus?What is this sound?"
Lightning-shaped cracks appear beneath.

"Could salvation emerge,from the well of this dream?"
Your grip,firm,it drags me down.
"All this world my love,is in your mind". [comments] => 4 [counter] => 323 [topic] => 64 [informant] => scentless_flower [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )
You

Contributed by scentless_flower on Friday, 28th June 2013 @ 07:11:43 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



A shattered memory amidst a dream.
That's what you said,that's what i know.
So i leaned in your eyes to kiss,
and flick through the past as arrayed in your mind.

A saturated flourished meadow,
that light forsook and darkness reigned.
Flowers of death and trees of sin,
excuses dancing and lies running free.

A sky,that night now stole,
a sky she hid in the bays of Erebus.
What a gash that is felt,
devoid of the moon and ripped of the sun.

My hand arose to meet my lips,
to wipe the sorrow bleeding through.
I wanted to tell you,i wanted you to know
but my words barb inside me,my lips can not part.

My body weak,my sight darkened,
to my knees i crumble and lower my head.
A tear escapes my misty eyes,
heavily trickles and to the ground it thuds.

"What is this ruckus?What is this sound?"
Lightning-shaped cracks appear beneath.

"Could salvation emerge,from the well of this dream?"
Your grip,firm,it drags me down.
"All this world my love,is in your mind".




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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Friday, 28th June 2013 @ 08:34:56 PM AEST
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When I read this I imagine a world decorated in beauty and torn to pieces by ache. It doesn't take long to feel the acres of emotion you've packed into a well delivered piece of writing. Again, the lines carry you into this world of raw heartache. Great job. Visually moving.


Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 28th June 2013 @ 10:38:12 PM AEST
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Very sad but u r a great writer.
Blessings,
emy


Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by karu on Saturday, 29th June 2013 @ 05:50:52 AM AEST
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superb writing


Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th June 2013 @ 04:00:43 PM AEST
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This r4eally drew me in! I like your write, very trippy!




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