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If i�m not here anymore
Contributed by
JonasS
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Wednesday, 10th July 2013 @ 03:00:22 PM in AEST
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I was sitting, thinking
What about when I pass away
Would anyone be there
At my funeral day
Would the day be as sunny
Or would it turn grey
Would it feel different
Or would it feel the same
When im not here anymore
Would you wait by the door
Just to hope id come home
And would you be there alone
Would anybody cry
The day that i die
Would anybody care
If I werent there
As i was sitting there crying
There acurred another tought
Would people be praising
Or screaming at the lord
Would the days feel longer
Or feel just as short
I cant bear all this pain
That the doubt has brought
When im not here anymore
Would you wait by the door
Just to hope id come home
And would you be there alone
Would anybody cry
The day that i die
Would anybody care
If I werent there
So please god
Answer me
And also why
Arent life easy
When im not here anymore
Would you wait by the door
Just to hope id come home
And would you be there alone
Would anybody cry
The day that i die
Would anybody care
If I werent there
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JonasS
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2013-07-10 15:00:22]
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Re: If i�m not here anymore
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th July 2013 @ 04:08:17 AM AEST
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They probably wouldn't be thinking any thing because they'll be devastated at the loss and your death.
Great writing. It's sad but beautifully written.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: If i�m not here anymore
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by RussellReinhardt on
Thursday, 11th July 2013 @ 05:14:06 AM AEST
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Makes one think of what is irrelevant. Once we are gone we are in a place where the world and its things are of no concern. Non the less very good write reads easy and flows well.
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Re: If i�m not here anymore
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by Helenesovig on
Thursday, 11th July 2013 @ 01:49:56 PM AEST
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Excellent I feel so proud!! Oh my God even better than I remembered and written by a 14 year old boy Id like to ad!! You are so cool.
Seje dreng!!
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Re: If i�m not here anymore
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by mick on
Thursday, 11th July 2013 @ 11:32:26 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written. |
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Re: If i�m not here anymore
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by Sommer on
Friday, 12th July 2013 @ 03:52:26 AM AEST
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| This is absolutely beautiful and I was actually considering writing a piece similar to this. Great work. |
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