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I also have an effect in my body for the name of my true love
Who might she be
I may not know what this may say
If I offer her flowers would that keep an beautiful and decent smile on her face
I feel like my heart is racing seventy two beats per seconds
Sweat coming down my forehead
I'm more nervous then ever
Trying to make that perfect impression for her
Trying to make her feel welcomed in my life just seems like an variable known to man by its self
I may offer her flowers and get know her better from time to time
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Flowers of The Right Women

Contributed by NightMareShoGun on Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 09:32:58 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I'm here to say this on an crisp cold day
I also have an effect in my body for the name of my true love
Who might she be
I may not know what this may say
If I offer her flowers would that keep an beautiful and decent smile on her face
I feel like my heart is racing seventy two beats per seconds
Sweat coming down my forehead
I'm more nervous then ever
Trying to make that perfect impression for her
Trying to make her feel welcomed in my life just seems like an variable known to man by its self
I may offer her flowers and get know her better from time to time
Will she accept it

Copyright © NightMareShoGun ... [ 2013-08-16 21:32:58]
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Re: Flowers of The Right Women (User Rating: 1 )
by MarkMark on Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 10:40:22 PM AEST
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She might but save the flowers until she is your girlfriend. you may scare her off and don't expect her to be happy if you are nice to them. Women get happy when we do things we don't even realize we have done.Something might mean more to them than when we plan a perfect evening and we don't even know what we did . Good poem but you need confidence not flowers with women They are different than men in what they see as important.

Re: Flowers of The Right Women (User Rating: 1 )
by Shipwreck on Saturday, 17th August 2013 @ 09:23:47 PM AEST
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Very Nice...I was nervous for you :)

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