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meaningless words
for all to see
there shallow & worthless
to all but me

nobody knows
just what I feel
& only me
would know that it's real

I except all comments
good & bad
for the stories I tell
of the life I had

no doubt I will make it
I still have my home
I've learned to live with
lonely alone

heartfelt expressions
for all to see
I am a poet
with a destiny

Roy Randolph Andrews AKA thehotshotpoet [comments] => 5 [counter] => 121 [topic] => 19 [informant] => thehotshotpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

lonely alone

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Tuesday, 15th October 2013 @ 11:06:11 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

meaningless words
for all to see
there shallow & worthless
to all but me

nobody knows
just what I feel
& only me
would know that it's real

I except all comments
good & bad
for the stories I tell
of the life I had

no doubt I will make it
I still have my home
I've learned to live with
lonely alone

heartfelt expressions
for all to see
I am a poet
with a destiny

Roy Randolph Andrews AKA thehotshotpoet

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2013-10-15 23:06:11]
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Re: lonely alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Eric56 on Wednesday, 16th October 2013 @ 10:17:42 AM AEST
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AWSOME! I love the flow!

Re: lonely alone (User Rating: 1 )
by CharM on Wednesday, 16th October 2013 @ 07:07:37 PM AEST
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nicely done....

(a few typos on some words though)

Re: lonely alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th October 2013 @ 10:04:56 PM AEST
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I like that term, lonely alone. Very clever.

Nicely done, Roy.

See ya'

Tim

Re: lonely alone (User Rating: 1 )
by ThatGuyNamedDre on Saturday, 19th October 2013 @ 12:52:21 AM AEST
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Dope poem, I like the way it flows smoothly, I also like how you used the words "lonely alone". Clever. All in all, dope poem man.

Re: lonely alone (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 03:13:06 PM AEST
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beautiful from title to last line,

hugs n' love nessa

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