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But most of my memories are almost gone.
I remember our childhood dreams,
Then realizing what I had done wrong.

We were torn apart by unmeant angry words,
Which I still regret to this day.
Wishing I had said something better,
Wishing you would come back and stay.

I sit upon this old well, remembering
The promise that you made, which now makes me cry
You said you would help me whenever I needed it
So where is your shoulder for me to cry on, tonight?

As days go by, I sit here and wait
Hoping you will come back someday.
And as I wait, I gaze at the stars, remembering,
The last time you smiled, on that fateful day
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Remember That Starry Night

Contributed by ruby_star_angel on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Gazing up at the stars above, remembering
But most of my memories are almost gone.
I remember our childhood dreams,
Then realizing what I had done wrong.

We were torn apart by unmeant angry words,
Which I still regret to this day.
Wishing I had said something better,
Wishing you would come back and stay.

I sit upon this old well, remembering
The promise that you made, which now makes me cry
You said you would help me whenever I needed it
So where is your shoulder for me to cry on, tonight?

As days go by, I sit here and wait
Hoping you will come back someday.
And as I wait, I gaze at the stars, remembering,
The last time you smiled, on that fateful day

Copyright © ruby_star_angel ... [ 2003-05-17 10:05:00]
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Re: Remember That Starry Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Dot on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 07:39:29 PM AEST
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A sad and forlorn poem straight from your hurting heart. Hugs, Dot

Re: Remember That Starry Night (User Rating: 1 )
by ruby_star_angel on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 07:58:09 PM AEST
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Thanks for your support. At times like that, it's the best thing to recieve. Thanks.

Re: Remember That Starry Night (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 04:31:38 PM AEST
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awwwwwww........this is sooooo beautiful. i love it! now i'm off to read more of yours. bravo. :)

Always,
~*riki*~

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