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[sid] => 177134
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[aid] => mick
[title] => In the shadows
[time] => 2013-11-09 09:31:40
[hometext] => this one hit me almost a year ago, but found myself unable to go past the sixth verse and finally today I've managed to finish it, or as close to being done as I can get it.
[bodytext] => it's been too long since I've written anything, and I hope this is a decent enough piece not to be flayed alive(I jest, I jest, seriously though, it's been too long and I hope both my spelling and grammar have improved in this long absence from writing poetry) In the shadows did it lay Whispering softly that I may Find the hubris in my soul. In the shadows did it whisper Gently stroking on its whisker So I may fulfill my role. In the shadows did it help me Offered arm that held me gently And kept at bay the gaping hole. In the shadows did I stumble Startled by a distant rumble; Lost my footing and I fell. In the shadows did it hit me Evil scent that cannot be And found myself a guest in Hell. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 43 [informant] => deathbringer [notes] => Spelling corrected per request ~ Moderator_18 Nov 9, 2013 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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