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Array ( [sid] => 177136 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My most desired obsession... [time] => 2013-11-09 09:48:14 [hometext] => For the one my soul desires above all others... [bodytext] => The words exist in my mind
somewhere
Yet I don’t know how to form them
to explain it to you
to make you see
how I feel
The depth of my love for you
On the tip of my tongue
right there...
So close...
but I can’t…
they just aren't available
they can't be spoken
I'm Incapable of poetic formulation
That would do it justice
This longing to say to you
to tell you these feelings
The burning inside
of this fire
this desire
this grip you hold on me
That I love so much
Just to see you smile
Or hear you giggle
oh how you tempt me
And try to trip me
To fall for you
To fall in love...
I try not to slip
But I've already lost my footing
And I try to show so much
And I hope so much you see
That i long so much to let it out
caressing your heart in my mind
To kiss the immaculate lips of an angel
You are a silken treasure
My most desired obsession
I'm lulled by your soothing voice
I get lost in your eyes
As I peer into your stained glass soul
through your mesmerizing windows
And this longing remains
some days it is unbearable
to not share those words together
so I admire from afar
Oh my precious goddess
So humble in your ways
So caring in your actions
I only hope that I am given
For the rest of our lives
The opportunity forever
The time every single day
to tell you just how beautiful you are...
And that you are absolutely amazing!
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My most desired obsession...

Contributed by holderofthestone on Saturday, 9th November 2013 @ 09:48:14 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The words exist in my mind
somewhere
Yet I don’t know how to form them
to explain it to you
to make you see
how I feel
The depth of my love for you
On the tip of my tongue
right there...
So close...
but I can’t…
they just aren't available
they can't be spoken
I'm Incapable of poetic formulation
That would do it justice
This longing to say to you
to tell you these feelings
The burning inside
of this fire
this desire
this grip you hold on me
That I love so much
Just to see you smile
Or hear you giggle
oh how you tempt me
And try to trip me
To fall for you
To fall in love...
I try not to slip
But I've already lost my footing
And I try to show so much
And I hope so much you see
That i long so much to let it out
caressing your heart in my mind
To kiss the immaculate lips of an angel
You are a silken treasure
My most desired obsession
I'm lulled by your soothing voice
I get lost in your eyes
As I peer into your stained glass soul
through your mesmerizing windows
And this longing remains
some days it is unbearable
to not share those words together
so I admire from afar
Oh my precious goddess
So humble in your ways
So caring in your actions
I only hope that I am given
For the rest of our lives
The opportunity forever
The time every single day
to tell you just how beautiful you are...
And that you are absolutely amazing!

Copyright Â© holderofthestone ... [ 2013-11-09 09:48:14]
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Re: My most desired obsession... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 10th November 2013 @ 01:37:28 AM AEST
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Simply beautiful you should share it with who ever.
Smiles, blessings,
emy

Re: My most desired obsession... (User Rating: 1 )
by mvvenkataraman on Sunday, 10th November 2013 @ 02:34:55 AM AEST
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The poet has played in free verse
To narrate his heart that now loves
His language is fine with meaning
He has given a lovely description
Of his emotion filled with affection.

mvvenkataraman

Re: My most desired obsession... (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Tuesday, 12th November 2013 @ 08:39:43 AM AEST
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Forever it has been the job of the poet to capture feelings with words. :) A very difficult job indeed. Well put.

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