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Across the land
Just like mist
Upon my hand

Sun comes up
From deep inside
Just like joy
With no place to hide

Clouds will form
Upon the sky
Just like sorrow
When you cry

You wake up
Late in the night
Just like an owl
Taking to flight

You feel peace
Your friend are near
Just like a child
When feeling fear.

Somewhere inside
There is a lift
From deep inside
You have a gift.

Inside your soul,
There's so much light.
You can do it
You'll win the fight.

Just keep on going
You have a friend
Who will support you
Until the very end. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 25 [informant] => speedy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

the fight

Contributed by speedy on Thursday, 21st November 2013 @ 06:29:12 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Rain falls down
Across the land
Just like mist
Upon my hand

Sun comes up
From deep inside
Just like joy
With no place to hide

Clouds will form
Upon the sky
Just like sorrow
When you cry

You wake up
Late in the night
Just like an owl
Taking to flight

You feel peace
Your friend are near
Just like a child
When feeling fear.

Somewhere inside
There is a lift
From deep inside
You have a gift.

Inside your soul,
There's so much light.
You can do it
You'll win the fight.

Just keep on going
You have a friend
Who will support you
Until the very end.

Copyright © speedy ... [ 2013-11-21 18:29:12]
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Re: the fight (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 24th November 2013 @ 07:30:37 PM AEST
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Wow u r diffidently strutting your talent in this awesome write.
Strut on.
big huggs, smiles blessing,
emy+

Re: the fight (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 13th May 2014 @ 09:31:36 PM AEST
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great style and flow, a joy to read,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: the fight (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 05:08:59 AM AEST
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Great write. and I love the last few stanzas of hope.

It is nice when we have those moments of encouragement

Re: the fight (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 03:58:21 PM AEST
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An excellent mix and nature and inspiration. Call it naturation.

Fox

Re: the fight (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Saturday, 31st October 2020 @ 01:59:18 AM AEST
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Simply awesome.
I get it. Let/'/s pretend together.
We/'/ll be actors and pretend......
You need not pretend....this was fantastic.
You/'/re just humble.
God Bless....
Jim

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