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What's under the surface.
They don't see the fear;
They don't see the pain.

The world doesn't know
What's hidden so deep.
They can't see the tears;
They can't see us weep.

The world cannot hear
What's playing inside.
They can't find the screams;
They can't find the scars.

We know what's there;
What's hidden inside
Under the surface
Where eyes cannot see;
Where ears cannot hear.
The tears that we hide;
We bury our fear.

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untitled

Contributed by speedy on Saturday, 21st December 2013 @ 11:13:12 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

The world doesn't see
What's under the surface.
They don't see the fear;
They don't see the pain.

The world doesn't know
What's hidden so deep.
They can't see the tears;
They can't see us weep.

The world cannot hear
What's playing inside.
They can't find the screams;
They can't find the scars.

We know what's there;
What's hidden inside
Under the surface
Where eyes cannot see;
Where ears cannot hear.
The tears that we hide;
We bury our fear.

Copyright © speedy ... [ 2013-12-21 11:13:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 21st December 2013 @ 10:17:05 PM AEST
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Everyone can relate to this! thank you for writing it. You've said a lot in very few words! I needed to read it twice to make sure I didn't miss any of the concepts!
thank you for sharing what all of us know but few of us can say!

softerware

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by twitterbird on Saturday, 28th December 2013 @ 07:41:45 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, thank you for posting

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 02:37:15 PM AEST
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so true, beautifully written my friend,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Sunday, 12th July 2015 @ 02:44:29 PM AEST
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Well written. And what would the world say about us?

Best,
Fox

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Tuesday, 8th September 2015 @ 04:04:55 PM AEST
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This is a really awesome poem that I believe I can relate to :)

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