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Of herself tonight
Beautifully dressed, - surrounds
So clean, so bright

She sent it to my cellphone
I looked at it a while
Pictured there on a tiny screen
She should of seen my smile

Captured lovely, dressed in blue
Its hard to guess her height
With just a picture one inch tall
And me, with my failing sight

She may be taller in real life
I hope so for her sake
Or hows she going to hold knife & fork
And eat from a great big plate

All I know is she writes me
Like an angel on gossamer wing
Her words alight like butterflies
And make mine own heart sing

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She

Contributed by Autumn101 on Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 01:18:07 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

She sent me a photo
Of herself tonight
Beautifully dressed, - surrounds
So clean, so bright

She sent it to my cellphone
I looked at it a while
Pictured there on a tiny screen
She should of seen my smile

Captured lovely, dressed in blue
Its hard to guess her height
With just a picture one inch tall
And me, with my failing sight

She may be taller in real life
I hope so for her sake
Or hows she going to hold knife & fork
And eat from a great big plate

All I know is she writes me
Like an angel on gossamer wing
Her words alight like butterflies
And make mine own heart sing

Copyright © Autumn101 ... [ 2013-12-31 13:18:07]
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Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 01:27:52 PM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL
would love this to have been about me , so lovely, she is so lucky, your words are wonderful

Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by thistle_and_fern on Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 03:11:12 PM AEST
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WOW
Is all I can say to this Mr Autumn
She does sound lovely.

Welcome to YPDC

Am anticipating more poems from you and cant wait to read more.

You have a gift for words

Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 08:48:54 PM AEST
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Very very nice. I really enjoyed this and like it a lot. Can relate to it very well.

Thank you and photo 1036153111_gif.gif

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to YPDC. Enjoy the ride.

Tim

Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 24th May 2018 @ 11:08:23 PM AEST
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Truly wonderful!!!!

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