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Where Are You
Contributed by
JJTiger
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Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Where are you when I need you
When my problems don't seem so few
When my world feels wrongly upside down
It brings me sorrows and a frown
I want you to be oh so near
When I am so full of fear
I want to tell you what I feel
Because it all seems to dreadfully real
Please come to me fast
Don't know if I will last
It's hurting in my heart
As if I'm being pulled apart
The darkness is surrounding me
I'm wanting to run and flee
With you I know I'll feel safe
Away from all harm and strafe
I want you to call me on the phone
When I feel so awfully alone
I want to tell you my pain
How I think I am going insane
I want to know where you are
I hope you are not too far
Quickly come to me
Your beautiful face I long to see
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JJTiger
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2003-05-18 09:05:00]
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Re: Where Are You
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 12:15:33 PM AEST
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| You express yourself very well here. good poem. |
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Re: Where Are You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 12:42:33 AM AEST
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| great write there. i would suggest reading it aloud and adding some fill in words here and there to make the rhythm smoother. but you expressed well. sounds like you're in love there |
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Re: Where Are You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 06:26:33 PM AEST
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| WOW! Beautiful poem, I really do like this one very much. You do a wonderful job expressing yourself. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Where Are You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 01:47:54 PM AEST
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| I like the line "Your beautiful face I long to see" the whole poem is very lovely... |
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Re: Where Are You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:51:19 PM AEST
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| Hey tiger! I love the poems, very touching, really. |
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