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Can'tCan
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Monday, 20th January 2014 @ 05:11:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Can't warm a stone cold heart Can't teach selfish souls to share Can't force dead minds to start Can't make a child's life fair
Can argue a debate too far Can scream out to deaf ears Can wail against who they are Can try to calm a child's fears
Can't explain why parents leave Can't ignore the lack of concern Can't ask a crying child to believe Can't make disappearing parents return
Can hold a child in loving arms Can give back childhood dreams Can open worlds of delightful charms Can promise to protect by any means
Can't describe the disgust one feels Can't override the urge to destroy Can't quiet a mind's spinning reels Can't stop wishing for revenge's toy
Can build a universe of hope and joy Can close the door and toss the key Can thank God for this precious boy Can walk toward the wonders yet to be
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Re: Can'tCan
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Saturday, 25th January 2014 @ 03:32:15 AM AEST (User
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Thank you for this lovely sing songy reminder that there are always choices, antidotes, options, something we can do.
You have defied denial, here, and left your reader with hope.
Last stanza is priceless.
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Re: Can'tCan
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 14th May 2014 @ 06:42:53 PM AEST (User
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beautiful in style, flow and imagery, a delight to
read with many truths and a lovely endline:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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