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Array ( [sid] => 177917 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Complete Whole [time] => 2014-03-09 19:48:33 [hometext] => This is something i wrote for a guy that stole my breath and heart away. It hasn't been that long but it feels like it's been years. [bodytext] => Sitting here lost in thought's of only you
I've always been told I should think these things through
But there you are so close with something so rare
Could it be you who will be the answer to my prayer?

Alone i stare at a blank screen to a text
Unable to find the right words to say to you next
I'm falling hard and falling fast
Quickly forgetting the heart-ache that haunts my past

My heart's pounding hard in my chest
I know for certain you're different from all the rest
My hands are shaking, Oh god what do i do?
I just want to be so close to you

How to express exactly what I'm feeling,
How to make these words appealing?
How can I show you how perfect you really are?
Tell you that you're my wishing star

From today and from now on, I'm setting a goal
A goal to prove that you are my one true complete whole









[comments] => 3 [counter] => 120 [topic] => 2 [informant] => NikaShortyyCakeFolsom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Complete Whole

Contributed by NikaShortyyCakeFolsom on Sunday, 9th March 2014 @ 07:48:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Sitting here lost in thought's of only you
I've always been told I should think these things through
But there you are so close with something so rare
Could it be you who will be the answer to my prayer?

Alone i stare at a blank screen to a text
Unable to find the right words to say to you next
I'm falling hard and falling fast
Quickly forgetting the heart-ache that haunts my past

My heart's pounding hard in my chest
I know for certain you're different from all the rest
My hands are shaking, Oh god what do i do?
I just want to be so close to you

How to express exactly what I'm feeling,
How to make these words appealing?
How can I show you how perfect you really are?
Tell you that you're my wishing star

From today and from now on, I'm setting a goal
A goal to prove that you are my one true complete whole













Copyright © NikaShortyyCakeFolsom ... [ 2014-03-09 19:48:33]
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Re: Complete Whole (User Rating: 1 )
by CharM on Monday, 10th March 2014 @ 05:50:27 AM AEST
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Very nice! I see we have similar style of writing and going through the same thing. I say if it's really meant toe me then it will happen.... ;-)


Re: Complete Whole (User Rating: 1 )
by CharM on Monday, 10th March 2014 @ 05:51:53 AM AEST
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(oops typo) If it's meant to be then it will happen....


Re: Complete Whole (User Rating: 1 )
by Autumn101 on Sunday, 23rd March 2014 @ 12:15:32 AM AEST
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Beautiful




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