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Array ( [sid] => 17807 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => marla the tumor [time] => 2003-05-19 11:35:00 [hometext] => insprired by a movie guess which one? [bodytext] => 20 nights no sleep
deprived of life
hours are blurs
swelling under my eyes
who left the pilot light on
the clock flashes in my head
who am i today
yesterdays teller
tonights drowning victim
pull the trigger back a little farther
let the belt slap back
and cos whiplash
im gonna be me tomorrow
mr. bi-polar in the shadows [comments] => 7 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 43 [informant] => apartment213 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

marla the tumor

Contributed by apartment213 on Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

20 nights no sleep
deprived of life
hours are blurs
swelling under my eyes
who left the pilot light on
the clock flashes in my head
who am i today
yesterdays teller
tonights drowning victim
pull the trigger back a little farther
let the belt slap back
and cos whiplash
im gonna be me tomorrow
mr. bi-polar in the shadows

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Re: marla the tumor (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 05:50:04 PM AEST
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very good job kenny, very clever....i know which movie....but im not gonna tell cuz i wanna see what other people can fingure it out....i love you, paint mongoose

Lindsey

Re: marla the tumor (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 09:07:50 PM AEST
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ewww! to the title lol! i have sat here for quite a while trying to know the movie and i must have missed that one, but now i want to see it, lol, this is great, i wanted to say a vamprye movie yet i think he is alive and it is his mood, his bi-polar sale? let me know ok? hugs nessa

Re: marla the tumor (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 09:09:52 PM AEST
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sorry that was 'spose to be 'bi-polar self'.. see at least you know i was still concentrating the poem, lol

Re: marla the tumor (User Rating: 1 )
by Apartment213 on Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 10:24:02 PM AEST
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ok i let ya in on the secret...the movie is fight club! edward nortan and brad pitt are the same person. edward nortan becomes tired with his life and at some point he meets tyler derdan(brad pitt) and that is his second personality, u must see this movie it is one of the best movies ive ever seen. oh dont tell anyone yet i wanna see who can get it!
bye
KENNY

Re: marla the tumor (User Rating: 1 )
by DOCTERKRISITN on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 02:47:46 PM AEST
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i know what movie it is cause billy told me!
i thought it was it but wasn't sure

Re: marla the tumor (User Rating: 1 )
by wazarov on Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 01:11:02 AM AEST
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hell yeh, i see some wonderful inspiration has struck your mind kenny. good one dude.

Re: marla the tumor (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 04:20:42 PM AEST
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it's fight club...-klit-

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