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Everyone Feels Lonely
Contributed by
Archie
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Monday, 12th May 2014 @ 01:40:03 PM in AEST
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Everyone feels lonely
At times in there lives
Everyone needs someone
To give them wisdom or advice
When they feel that they have no one
Why do I stand idly by
When everyone feels lonely
Sometimes
I want to believe
There's still goodness in this world
When all around me
All I see is selfishness
Everyone with full hands
Passes him who has nothing
I don't want to be selfish
Anymore
When everyone feels lonely
At times in their lives
Everyone needs someone
To give them wisdom or advice
When they feel that they have no one
I will not stand idly by
When everyone feels lonely
Sometimes
When everyone feels lonely-
Sometimes
My performance of this song is at the 25:42 time stop, I also recite 'A look inside the man'
Note: At a separate outing I performed "I Wanna Go To That Land" and "See Who I Am" All three songs have been well received by my friends and peers. I hope to publish in the next few years, but I have learned to have patience. I am just glad to share these as poems with you.
Copyright ©
Archie
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2014-05-12 13:40:03]
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Re: Everyone Feels Lonely
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th May 2014 @ 10:22:26 PM AEST
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this looks lovely as a song; i tried to find this and
your other songs on youtube but couldn't, maybe
you could pm me with a link, i would love to hear them,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Everyone Feels Lonely
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 13th May 2014 @ 10:59:33 PM AEST
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This is really good Archie, and great to see you posting. I can very much hear this as a song. There is a haunting rhythm that you delivered this message with, and it begs to be heard, and pondered. Well done.
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Re: Everyone Feels Lonely
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st May 2014 @ 07:15:40 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful :) |
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Re: Everyone Feels Lonely
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 3rd August 2020 @ 04:35:00 PM AEST
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| Awesome Archie |
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