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Array ( [sid] => 178313 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Then there was nothing~ [time] => 2014-05-13 00:44:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Where does the heart meet the soul

on the other side of nothing?

When the wind moans

and the Doves call

rain streams,mind screams.

Ashes blown away

in Spring whispers

and then there is nothing

just ache and pain

and memories tap you on the shoulder

and jolt you to realize

you packed it away,

only for it to rise again

with a mighty roar

a dragon breathing fire.

In the center of it all

breath in, breath out

one foot in front of the other

looking around

and it is surreal

and sad where you stand

feet cemented in the ground

the trumpets blow

the flag waves,folded proper

and placed where it should go.

Then there was nothing

nothing at all but the wind.

(C) M.Michelle H

5-12-2014 [comments] => 4 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 39 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

~Then there was nothing~

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 13th May 2014 @ 12:44:37 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Where does the heart meet the soul

on the other side of nothing?

When the wind moans

and the Doves call

rain streams,mind screams.

Ashes blown away

in Spring whispers

and then there is nothing

just ache and pain

and memories tap you on the shoulder

and jolt you to realize

you packed it away,

only for it to rise again

with a mighty roar

a dragon breathing fire.

In the center of it all

breath in, breath out

one foot in front of the other

looking around

and it is surreal

and sad where you stand

feet cemented in the ground

the trumpets blow

the flag waves,folded proper

and placed where it should go.

Then there was nothing

nothing at all but the wind.

(C) M.Michelle H

5-12-2014

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2014-05-13 00:44:37]
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Re: ~Then there was nothing~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 13th May 2014 @ 01:49:48 AM AEST
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oh sweetie! i cried...tears are wet on my face as i
write this, it is beautiful and straight from the
heart, i know your heart is breaking! i wish i was
with you so i could give you big hugs! love you!

@->>->--

Re: ~Then there was nothing~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Voices-Ghost on Tuesday, 13th May 2014 @ 10:03:58 PM AEST
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Ok, so now both of you made me cry tonight. I agree with Nessa, I feel your heaart breaking in this. I wish I could give you a huge hug and try to help you.
Love you my friend.

Voices Ghost

Re: ~Then there was nothing~ (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 05:18:47 PM AEST
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i wish i could just wash your pain away

Re: ~Then there was nothing~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Saturday, 23rd August 2014 @ 07:29:25 AM AEST
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poignant

Invierno

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